A6 People
《Some personal feelings about friends》
第二段who has just divorced with hos wife who is a lesbian中"hos"改为"his"
第五段he is also the guy who says most moving words中says与moving之间添加the
倒数第二段god blesses them and i firmly believed that they will gather together one day because of destinies中i改为I
《About Long-distance relationship》第二段 there will always be something that we need do by our own中by改为on
第三段we all know that the freshness of love is very important thing中is与very之间添加a
第四段 you may always perceive your lover to be perfect,But as you know each other better中perfect与But间的","改为"."
B6探索版
《动物的噩梦:揭示五次物种大灭绝》中“刘宇翔（正阳203）”改为“刘宇翔（正阳302）”
第七段的“岩石蒸气云”改为“岩石蒸汽云”
第十三段“地”改为“时”