【谁禹争锋，豪气冲天】自己画的禹豪

我画的不是很好，希望吧里的人能题一些建议。[FACE WITH STUCK-OUT TONGUE AND TIGHTLY-CLOSED EYES][FACE WITH STUCK-OUT TONGUE AND TIGHTLY-CLOSED EYES][FACE WITH STUCK-OUT TONGUE AND TIGHTLY-CLOSED EYES]楼下放图