【他不爱我】求一篇关于介绍莎莎的英语作文！！！谢谢了啊！！

我英语也不行

My favourite pop star is jinsha she very nice and poiutooy ok hei man,if you are a men you can love jin sha

My favourite pop star is jinsha .She is very beautiful.she is a good singer. Her voice sound very sweet. She has a lot of good songs .Such as <<the summer which is blew by wind>>. She is very hard-working.For example she doesn't stop practising singing until she sings very well. She has acted many movies . The lates movie <<lemon>> will be released next year.Would you like to go to see the film with me ?

莎拉们帮忙看看有啥语法错误吗。我尽力了楼主。

我最喜欢的明星是金莎。她非常漂亮。他是一位好歌手。她的嗓音听起来非常甜。他有许多好歌。比如《被风吹过的夏天》。她十分的努力。举个例子，她不会停止练习唱歌直到她能把歌唱得很好为止。他参加了许多电影。最新的一部电影《柠檬》会在明年上映。你愿意和我一起去 看吗？

被动语态 从句都用上了。若是考试作文文采分都能的拿到了。楼主自己再改改吧。时间也许没那么长，你讲得慢一点吧。