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【原创】【红鹰】The Secret(全英文,附译文,含H)

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1楼给羡,和她那不知名的妹子
《这是第三次了仆受够了!!!!!当上吧主第一件事就是把其他两个贴给删了!


1楼2011-11-05 16:45回复
    前记:
    其实想写这个全英文完全是因为羡在《JIAN情》的前记里的一句话
    【其实本来想写个英国背景的(某妖妹子说过提高英语最简单有效办法就是写英语同人)
    但……拉倒吧我才不要为写个同人一阵一阵的跑去翻字典呢(虽然很喜欢那句“SirSirdoyouknow……”
    真给力,仆感觉自己的英语有些退步了,这真的是个学英语的好办法!!
    于是这就是这没开头没结尾倒叙手法一团乱麻的逻辑英语文的由来
    同时郁闷地发现一个问题.....在写H的过程中查字典是查的最频繁的- -|||
    由于是练笔就不要挑那么多错出来了,反正仆还是尽力解答吧,因为就算有些乱但自己还是明白想要表达的意思的
    注:此文是以香克斯为第一人称叙述的一个故事
    


    2楼2011-11-05 16:45
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      You’re the warmest sunshine in my heart.
      You’re the only one of mine.
      Please open your eyes again, and look at me.
      I will tell you the secret, with my whole life.
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      3楼2011-11-05 16:46
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        Did you remember the days we had before?
        Ah, I forgot…you can’t hear me.
        But you are right here, isn’t it?
        Ha-ha…please do not be angry. I was just thought of, something funny.
        Memories......
        “Hawk-Eye? What’s up, to duel with me?” I admitted that I felt excited when I saw you.
        But you just said ‘I am not interested in duel with you who lose left arm’, after that, you took out a paper and showed it to me.
        It was a boy with a big smile on his face.
        Just like me? I sighed.
        That day, you told me about Luffy and his partners. Named…Roronoa Zoro, right? Damn it! What’s the meaning of the smile when you talked about that youth?! Give me an explanation, Hawk-Eye!!!
        You just said two words——“Shut up.”
        I obeyed.
        I had a big party with my partners, but you just went into the bedroom that Beckman arranged for you. I know you didn’t like noisy. So I went in after you. But...
        “Hawk-Eye! It’s dangerous. Not joking!!!” The black sword would kill me if I didn’t get back.
        “Mihawk,” I gave you a cup of beer. “Cheers!”
        “......” You hesitated for a while, then took the wooden cup and gave me a smile. “Cheers.”
        I laughed loudly. Perhaps you didn’t know.
        ——Your smile, is that beautiful.
        How strange it is. I will not be tipsy, no matter how much I drunk.
        But the truth is, I did something that I will never do when I was clear-headed.
        Also, I will never forget it.
        The time passed very quickly. I couldn’t remember how much we drunk. The only thing I could remember is...
        You.
        I did not notice your skin is that white before. When we met at Roger Town, I thought it’s your golden eyes attracted me. For sure.
        I put my right hand on your black hair to make you look at me, and frenzied, I approached you.
        Then, kissed.
        I don’t know what you were thinking about in a split second. I just saw your golden eyes opened a little, but you did not refuse. Either me or my rabid kiss.
        Seconds later, I let you gone. And my hand took off our clothes silently. Soon, both of us bumped into the soft bed.


        4楼2011-11-05 16:46
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          I cannot forget your sound about my ears. It’s just like the sounds of nature, kinds of god. Mihawk, do you know? I sometimes thought you were a treasure instead of a human.
          A treasure of MINE.
          I kissed your clavicle, your chest, your waist…everywhere. Will it be hurt? Maybe. Sorry, Mihawk, please forgive me. This would be the first time and the last time also, I made you hurt.
          Please, forgive me...really......
          Everything...I remember everything about you.
          But how can you left me so fast?
          Luffy succeeded in became the Pirate King; he will be the second Roger of the sea.
          Also, the youth you look forward, had been the best swordsman in the world.
          And the last thing you left for me, were your last news and your cold body.
          I don’t believe my eyes, I don’t believe that you left me so fast, I don’t believe the moment you died on the beach!!
          How could you do that...I thought, put my head into my arm.
          Who would cry? I will never admit that I will cry for a man, remember it.
          But how to explain the water drops on the ground...?
          “Ahhh!! Mihhhhawwwwwwk!!!!!”
          Shit, you think I will forgive you? No, never! I will not forgive you, forever. Nobody can stop me from loving you!!!
          ...Love......
          Please open your eyes again, and look at me.
          I will tell you the secret, with my whole life.
          The End


          5楼2011-11-05 16:46
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            译文:
            你是我心中最温暖的阳光。
            你是我生命的唯一。
            请你再次睁开你的眼睛,看着我。
            我愿意用我的生命,来向你诉说这个秘密。
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            6楼2011-11-05 16:47
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              你还记得我们曾经在一起的日子吗?
              啊,我忘了……现在的你是听不见我在说什么的。
              但是你就在这里,对吧?
              哈哈……请不要生气。我只是想起了一些,有趣的事情。
              那一天……
              “鹰眼?真是稀客,你是来找我决斗的吗?”无可否认,当我看见你时,竟感到一阵兴奋。
              而你只说了一句‘我没兴趣和失去了左手的你决斗’,之后,你便拿出一张纸给我看。
              那是一个脸上挂着灿烂笑容的男孩。
              就像我一样?我叹息一声。
              那天,你告诉了我路飞和他的伙伴的事。好像是叫……Roronoa Zoro,对吧?给我等一下!在你提到那个小子时脸上的微笑是怎么回事?!给我个解释,鹰眼!!!
              你只说了两个字——“闭嘴。”
              我照办了。
              我和我的伙伴们举行了一个盛大的宴会,你却只是走进了那个Beckman为你安排的房间。我知道你不喜欢吵闹,所以我跟在你后面进去了。但……
              “鹰眼!这很危险,不是开玩笑的!!!”如果我不及时退后的话,那把黑刀就会要了我的小命。
              “Mihawk,”我递给你一杯酒。“干杯!”
              “…………”你犹豫片刻,然后从我手中接过木杯,对我露出一个微笑。“干杯。”
              我大笑着。可能连你自己都不知道。
              ——你的笑容,真的很美。
              真奇怪。我从来都不会醉,不管喝了多少。
              可事实是,我做了一些在我清醒时绝对不会做的事。
              而且,我永远都不会忘了它。
              时间流逝得很快。我不记得我们到底喝了多少,我唯一能记起的就是……
              你。
              我以前从未注意到你的肌肤是如此的白皙。当年我们在罗格镇相遇时,我猜是你的金眸吸引了我。一定。
              我伸出右手搭在你的黑发上,令你直视着我,然后,鬼使神差的,我靠近了你。
              之后,相吻。
              我不知道那一瞬间你心里想的什么,我只看见你金色的眼睛微微睁开了些,但你没有拒绝。不管是我,还是我那疯狂的吻。
              良久,我放开了你。静静地将两人的衣服都褪了下来,然后抱着你倒在了柔软的床铺上。


              7楼2011-11-05 16:47
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                我忘不了萦绕在耳边的你的声音。那简直就如天籁之音,如神一般。Mihawk,你知道吗?我有时在想,你简直是一个尤物,而非一个人类。
                一个只属于我的尤物。
                我吻着你的锁骨,你的胸部,你的腰……你的一切。会痛吗?也许吧。对不起,Mihawk。请你原谅我。这是我第一次,也是最后一次,弄疼你。
                请你原谅我……真的,很抱歉……
                一切……我记得有关你的一切。
                但你怎么能这么快就离开我?
                路飞当上了海贼王,他会成为这片海上的第二个罗杰船长。
                同样的,那个你所期待的小子,也成为了世界第一的剑豪。
                而你最后留给我的,则是你最后的消息,和你那冰冷的身体。
                我不相信我的眼睛,我不相信你会离我而去,我不相信你就这样死在那片海上!!
                你怎么能这样……我想着,把头深深埋入手臂。
                谁会哭啊?我绝不会为了一个男人哭,给我记住。
                但要如何解释这些地上的水渍……?
                “啊啊啊!!Mihhhhawwwwwwk!!!!!”
                该死,你以为我会原谅你吗?不,绝不!我永远不会原谅你,永远。没有人可以阻止我对你的爱!!!
                ……爱…………
                请你再次睁开你的眼睛,看着我。
                我会用我的生命,来向你诉说这个秘密。
                The End


                8楼2011-11-05 16:47
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                  虽然自己精自己的文很不好意思....


                  9楼2011-11-08 20:28
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                    没事没事,必须精啊!
                    夜你文笔进步了!


                    10楼2011-11-08 22:39
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                      咦,文笔有进步吗?


                      11楼2011-11-09 18:52
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                        显而易见


                        12楼2011-11-09 20:58
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                          看不下了,又在糟践鹰眼的形象。


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