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not long ago,there was clear plane about my future   and i was so sure if i work hard   i will make my dream come ture
But now i am not so sure. i am afraid of something
I am afraid before i do nothing
Am I a sheep or i was so innocent about success?



1楼2011-03-06 23:35回复
    plane?


    2楼2011-03-06 23:48
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      计划? 对不?


      3楼2011-03-06 23:51
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        clear前应该有个a吧…


        4楼2011-03-07 08:49
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          哦! 对!谢了


          5楼2011-03-07 11:27
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            i was so sure if i work hard i will…我觉得应该用过去式呢?worked,would


            6楼2011-03-07 11:53
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