最好能给点建议以及错误修改 平时110上下的水平，作文是大弱项，应用文+读后续写不到20分 刚练字不久写的有点丑，不喜勿喷

之前写的作文一直不知道怎么样，索性自己做了一个英语打分的小工具

能帮我改一下这篇作文吗，本人初中生写的不太好，别介意

Patience paying off Henry’s fast start is no accident.这句话怎么翻译啊，主语是Patience么

With the development of technology, instant messaging has become an indispensable communication tool in people's lives. It plays a significant role in both work team collaboration and personal contacts. The obvious advantage of instant messaging lies in its convenience, with applications like DingTalk and WeChat enabling us to communicate with people worldwide anytime, anywhere. Additionally, it enhances communication efficiency by reducing response times, making work and life more productive. However, instant messaging also has its drawbacks. Despite encryption technologies, user information

1.Green LifestyleWith the development of technology, we see more and more green lifestyles entering our lives, more and more people starting to drive new energy vehicles that don't consume fuel, restaurants using more paper straws, and the reduction of deforestation."All this is because people are increasingly paying attention to controlling carbon emissions, and people's living standards have improved due to technology. They will also consider how to maintain a stable future after their lives are better.". Global warming has become one of the hottest topics in the world. The

讲中国故事故事 Chinese culture is profound, lasting and far-reaching. In the five thousand years of inheritance, there are many stories of China with cultural connotations. Chinese culture has influenced many countries since ancient times, the most typical of which are North Korea and Japan. In their official languages, it is not difficult to see the shadow of China culture. The influence of Chinese culture on the world is obvious to all. There are Chinatowns where China people live all over the world, and it is universally acknowledged that porcelain, silk, gunpowder and other products

有人说我写作文有点像双重人格。 寻思这写的不挺正常吗

1.英语从句分不清楚，可以给我讲一下吗？ 2.英语作文当中，怎么写从句？总是纠结，不知从何下手。大佬求解

题目my dream job,来个哥给写一下

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As an emerging adult, how do you pla n to keep good relationship with your pa rents and shape your own future?

一本书或者一部电影给我们带来影响的英语作文

Some place you got in here.这句话是什么意思？

我这刚写87词就编不下去了，能说的全说了，求家人们帮帮忙

一、动词be构成的短语动词 1．be known as／be famous as作为……而闻名 be known for因……而出名 be known to为……所知 be known by凭……而知 The hill is known for the temple． LuXun is known to us as a writer． One can be known by his words and deeds． 2．be married to与……结婚 She is married to a musician． ．． 3．be tired of／with对……厌烦 He is tired of／with this kind of life． =He is bored with this kind of life． 4．be terrified at被……吓一跳 He is terrified at the snake． 5．be burdened with负重 He is burdened with a h

Most people complain of fortune, few of nature; and the kinder they think the latter has been to them, the more they murmur at what they call the injustice of the former. 很多人抱怨命运，却很少有人抱怨自然;人们越是认为自然对他们仁爱有加，便越是嘀咕命运对他们的所谓不公。

六、动词come构成的短语动词 1．come into…进入……状态 come into being(事物、局面等)产生；形成 The custom came into being long long ago． 2．come along过来；快点 Come along! It’s nearly eight o'clock． 3．come out出来；出版 How did the printing come out? 4．come true实现 I am sure your dream will come true one day． 5．come back to life苏醒过来 When the wounded soldier came back to life，he found himself in hospital． 6．come to the point说到要点，触及问题实质 7．come about发生，造成 The event came about as he had predic

The colors of friendship Once upon a time the colors of the world started to quarrel. All claimed that they were the best. The most important. The most useful. The favorite. 从前，世界上的各种颜色进行过一次争吵。每一种颜色都说自己是的，最重要的，最有用的，最美丽的、人喜欢的。

Everybody has to face bad days in their life. Some face ailments, some face fears, some face poverty, some face helplessness etc etc. No one can escape from it. It is a rule of life. Two things always combines together like joy and sadness, laugh and cry, health and illness, profit and loss, morning and night, confidence and inferiority complex, victory and failure likewise good days and bad days. 每个人都会有不如意的时候，有人身体欠佳，有人面临恐惧，有人贫困不堪，有人迷惘无助，等等，没有人能够一帆风顺，直至终老。如影随形，此消

　　作文，是语言能力的综合体现，也是考查重点。提高写作的途径有很多，阅读、练习等，无论哪一种归根结底都被叫做积累。积累什么呢?这话问到点子上了，我们高中阶段对于英语写作的积累包括：句型，单词和词组，谚语，名人名言，甚至写作思路也是看的多了、写的多了、积累的多了才会逐渐清晰的!所以，要想写好作文，必须积累!

　　1、主谓关系中人称和数量不一致性 　　汉语的动词不受主语的人称和数的影响，但英语的谓语动词要和主语保持一致，谓语动词要随着主语而变化。而学生主要用汉语思维，因此他们往往没有习惯去考虑主语是第几人称，是单数还是复数。例如： 　　a. A number of students is going to learn a foreign language. 　　b. He go to school by bike every day. 　　分析： 　　a句中a number of +复数名词做主语时，其谓语动词用复数形式。b中 He是第三人称单数，在一般现在时态

一、了解高分作文的特点 　　要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点： 　　1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 　　2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。 　　3、要点齐全，不缺要点。 　　4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。 　　5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，

I really do not know how many love stories I have left in me, but I want u be my last. one sentence per day 大家来秀出你唯美的翻译吧

You are my today and all of my tomorrows 执子之手，共度余生 欢迎大家一起讨论